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all alone we'll be just finerain covered your body
like skin covered mine
{ its just another day; }
the wind in your hair
stars in your eyes
{ i didn't know what happened to you
or your pale blue wrists; }
the forest in your heart is pounding
on the door to the ocean in mine
UsedA pillow soaked with tears.
My tears.

I cry all the time out of lonlieness now.

When will you love me again?
Or will you just use me?
Really now, be honest.
Truthful.
Hate me? Why? i've been nothing but nice!

And I've always cared.
Now you're leaving.
You don't care anymore.
Try is all I did.
However, you just used me.
I only wanted a best friend.
Now you don't want me.
Good grief!

Tell me what I did wrong!
Oppressed you? Never!

Your ideas were always great!
Ooutstanding, evem! You're gone now. You don't care.
Used me. That's all I ever was to you.
LonelyBy myself again.
I don't go anywhere.
To do anything. So I sit there,
Twining my fingers together in boredom.
Except - I don't have to be.
Really. I could call a friend.

The answering machine picks up.
Eventually I leave a message to call me back.
And I cry, because I hate being alone.
Rewinding my VHS tape, I play my favourite movie.
Sad one, though. It's Fried Green Tomatoes.

I hate being alone.

Cause it hurts. It's scary.
Radical thought run through my head when I'm alone.
You guys, please don't leave me, I request as tears run down my face...
whatever befalls the last star in the skyBeautiful Doom,
oh, she falls
93 million miles from the sun, part ii

in an inhuman race [8/365]
the world is going down
and she cradles the sky in her arms
and wonders the whereabouts of God
AvoidingWhen you're not here, I feel empty.
How much? A lot.
You're avoiding me.

And I'm sad.
Remember me? Or have I become invisible again?
Exceptional. That's what you used to call me.

You used to want to hang out all the time.
Outstanding, the way things change so suddenly.
Underneath my covers, I feel scared I'll lose you.

And yet, i don't call you. Because I'm scared of you, too.
Very much so. I don't want to be yeled at.
Only -
I miss you so much.
Do you miss me?
I waant to talk to you! But you're -
Not talking to me anymore.
Good grief, do you not want me anymore?

Maybe you don't. You could have told me, instead of breaking my heart.
Eve
InvisibleI am invisible.

Always alone.
More or less never noticed – so quiet and shy.

Can I ever be noticed? Will I?
Always alone,
Never noticed – uncared for.
And I'm sick of it.
Do you see me? Do you notice me?
Always alone. I'm sure you've forgotten me by now.
No fairI dont know why I cant be treated fairly,
Its probably because I act so nicely
That everyone never seems to worry
When I get hurt that I'll just hurry
To work to make it all better
Even though I wasnt the bed wetter.
I wasnt the one who lied or cheated
And yet I'm the one who needs to be hated.
I've given second chances to those who dont need them
But still get resented and horribly treated.
My kindness has continued to be taken for granted
So now my care has become dienchanted.
At this point I've nearly given up on my hopes,
But doing so woudle make me worse then those dopes.
Don't Walk In My Shoes (contest entry)Mom seems to hate me - always on about my grades.
Yet all I do is try my best.

Little good it does though.
I'm still going to get bad grades.
Future outlook? Not great.
Even though I try, I suck.

Still can't raise my grades. Can't be with friends.
Understand? I don't. Hang out with friends, she says. I make plans.
Can I go? I ask. No, she says.
Kicks me in the emotions. Parent logc.
Stupid, isn't it?

Rendering my life anti-social.
Even though they want me to be social.
And I hardly ever get out.
Like, I almost never ask either so I don't get yelled at.
Love them, do I? you ask.
Yes, I suppose. But I prefer home over school because -

Bulli
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~feebonacci Oct 28, 2006  Professional Photographer
photo de jr fulci ????? en tout cas c son masque
jolie prose bien glauque , beaucoup de rythmes et ca c'est un tres bon point pour amener le lecteur sans peine jusqu'au bout du text
continu comme ca , c'est trés joli et tres réels comme sentiments
nice job
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~Sabym Oct 29, 2006   Photographer
Non cé une photo de mé en effet cé le masque de fulci!! Merci pour ton comment! :lick:
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~feebonacci Oct 29, 2006  Professional Photographer
ok c pourquoi la fiche signalétique indique un canon et non pas un nikon
tout s'eclaire ; et je t'en prie....;)
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~Cindinou Oct 18, 2006
Je l'aime trop ton texte :heart:
J'espere que jtencourage a te défouler encore crime!!!
J'en veux d'autre texte comme ca moi :)
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Mood: Affection ~Sabym Oct 18, 2006   Photographer
Hé merci!! Pour d'autre texte jpense pas que sa va etre pour tout de suite pcq j'ai retrouver ma bonne humeur :headbang:!!! A moins que J'essaie de m'inspirer de ce qui est beau ds la vie :butterflytwo:

Hé encore merci pour le fav té un bon public!!! :clap: Pis toi cé quand que tu ty mets su déviant?????
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~Cindinou Oct 18, 2006
Jsais ben pas!! J'ai pas vraiment le temps c'est temps-ci! En plus y fait jamais beau :( P-e qu'au fond je me donne pleins de raisons... J'ai pas encore assez confiance jpense. Mais j'apprend bcp en voyant ce que les autres fond. Ca va finir par venir =)
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~Sabym Oct 18, 2006   Photographer
ok mé jai hate que tu sois prête!!!:lick:
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~JrFulci Oct 18, 2006
Le duo frappe
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Mood: Joy ~Sabym Oct 18, 2006   Photographer
Merci bcp !!
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